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Scarletta Blackbriar

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AHAHA. Finally, an official drawing of my OC. Holy crap this took so long to master. O.o;
Yo be nice to my work, don't use and don't steal kay? Kay. This is my personal content. :3

Paint tool SAI hurts my brain, man. This is probably my first TRUE piece of work on it. I've diddled with a full body of Scarlet and some other things but this is my first real try lol. Oh, let me link every tutorial I used, too. I used a LOT.

HAIR: [link]
SKIN: [link]
TEXTURE ON SHIRT: [link]
EYE COLOR DESIGN: [link] (I simplified the coloring though)
LIPS DESIGN: [link]

And I think that's all of it!
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

(I'm here on behalf of <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/e/s…" alt=":iconselftaughtartist:" title="SelfTaughtArtist" /> because your piece was in the group's critique requested folder.)

Hi there! Here goes! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>

First, I'm going to go with technique.
Your overall technique is very nice. You do a good job with shading and highlights, especially under the neck and on the curve of the shoulder, but i thought that a little bit more could be used to strengthen the piece, especially in the clothing (because i felt that it needed more depth) and a little more in the hair to show volume there. But your shading is still very good. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>
Your anatomy is also pretty sound (the face is fantastic, although a little stylistic~~ which isn't bad, because that's what makes it unique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>) but i thought that the anatomy on the shoulder was slightly off. The shoulder needs to be a little wider, even though it's like a sideways view, because i feel like right now, it looks like she's either missing a shoulder or is being sucked into the abyss. XD
As it is, it's too small looking to really support the head. But like i said, your head is beautiful.
The Texture in the clothing and hair really stood out to me, you did a very nice job with that, especially with the pattern on the shirt (which is gorgeous) and the individual strands of hair, that's really very nice.

Vision/Originality:
I wouldn't say this is the most original thing i've ever seen, but she is still interesting, and catches the viewers eye. (I must also take into consideration that i have no background on this character whatsoever~~ even the plainest character can be made spectacular with a good background story. :3 ) I must say i do love the two eye colors (i actually have a character myself with heterochromia) i've always been fascinated by that, it's so cool and quirky! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/> She's a very beautiful character, and the lips and eyes are nice and expressive! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

Overall, this is a very lovely piece, keep up the good work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="17" height="23" alt=":happybounce:" title=":happybounce:"/>
(i hope i wasn't mean~~ i don't mean to be, just hoping to give some constructive criticism. <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/l/a/l…" alt=":iconlazycryplz:" title="lazycryplz" />